Developmental Editing

Perfect for manuscripts needing an in-depth edit before submitting to a publisher or agent.

I will developmentally edit your manuscript, analyzing inconsistencies, plot holes, sentence and paragraph structure, and leaving tracked changes and detailed in-line comments throughout suggesting edits to make your manuscript more engaging for your readers. Copyediting and proofreading are included in this offering.

I will also provide you with an in-depth companion report with specific examples from your novel, summarizing what works, what doesn’t, and why, and evaluate:

  • Story structure
  • Character development
  • Plot development
  • Flow and pace
  • Voice
  • Grammar

I will also address submission guidelines and agent specifics to ensure your submission has that competitive edge (if applicable).

$12 for Flash-Fiction pieces (up to 2,000 words)

1.5 cents/word for Short Stories, Novellas, and Novels

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Satisfaction guarantee:

Not sure about my services?
Send me the first 5000 words and I will offer some feedback and advice. If you like how I work, we will continue with a plan that will meet your needs.

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